State the Facts
Unless you’re going to send a “press release” out over PR Newswire, Marketwire or PR Web, you can skip the “formal formatting” of the traditional press release all together, with the exception of answering the who, what, where, when and why in the first two sentences of your copy. This is pretty much about all anyone is going to read anyway.
Humble Art Thou
News announcements, fact sheets, marketing copy and web content should be void of mushy puffery. Even if you are truly amazing (which you probably are) – stay away from using aspiring adjectives like legendary, great, visionary, innovative, outstanding, leading, celebratory, famous, renowned, prestigious and world-class.
Oh, and don’t go making any exaggerated claims.
Reporters need to know just how new this “news” that you are sharing really is. Avoid relative time references, like “recently” or “lately”, while steering clear of compound suffixes such as pre- and post.
Quotes? Really? Why?
Skip the quotes altogether. If a reporter finds your story intriguing, they’ll interview the proper sources and scoop up their own quotes.
Keep it to 400 words or less and your boilerplate down to two sentences. Lead the reader to your website for more information. Leave them wanting more.
Where to Share
Follow our lead and take a short cut first. Begin by approaching the journalists who are most likely going to be interested in your company. If you are a new business, take a look at the coverage your competition has received and contact those TV, magazine, newspaper and online journalists/reporters first.
A Note About Declarations of Nothingness
You actually build trust with your reader when you avoid overused or trite phrases like –”easy-to-use”, “robust”, “ intuitive”, ”intelligent”, “ flexible”, ”low-cost”, and “seamless”.
Don’t make declarations of vague nothingness with unsupported attributions. For example forget about using phrases like “widely-thought”, “research has shown”, “experts declare” and “it has been proven.”
Do not appear to be more notable than you can prove. Try to use common sense – do not use phrases that lack precision. And finally, avoid using clichés and idioms, i.e. “tip of the iceberg”, “above-board” and “all ears”.
If your company news and story is that newsworthy than the facts should attract the coverage you deserve.